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中庸之道,褒贬參半。
唔知秀才兄又點睇呢?(廣東話)
秀才兄是NO EYE SEE :D "姆眼睇"
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秀才兄是NO EYE SEE :D "姆眼睇"
不懂 :confused:
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秀才公 也確認 了,證實沒有诽谤。
秀才是想拜师学艺,故不敢逆先生之意也...
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秀才兄是NO EYE SEE :D "姆眼睇"
想問长发飘飘係未廣東人,點解識廣東話架?
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不懂 :confused:
这位校务主任才是真正的冷若冰霜呢,偶是枉担了此恶名. :(
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这位校务主任才是真正的冷若冰霜呢,偶是枉担了此恶名. :(
他只是懶若兵傷
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想問长发飘飘係未廣東人,點解識廣東話架?
不是广东人, 可我会讲, 不是很准... :D
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不是广东人, 可我会讲, 不是很准... :D
所以你比我聰明,我的普通話很不濟,要拜你為師了。
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所以你比我聰明,我的普通話很不濟,要拜你為師了。
SAYNO又要被说是冷若冰霜了...说是吧,俺的国语也是不标准的,怎么办?
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SAYNO又要被说是冷若冰霜了...说是吧,俺的国语也是不标准的,怎么办?
總會比我講得好,因為我以前沒有正式學過,如今發覺太有用了,學如不及,尤恐失之。
多姿多彩的with結構
With是個介詞,基本的意思是“用”,但它也可以協助構成一個極為多采多姿的句型,在句子中起兩種作用﹔副詞與形容詞。with在下列結構中起副詞作用:
甲with+賓語+現在分詞或短語”,如:
(1) This article deals with common social ills, with particular attention being paid to vandalism.
乙with+賓語+過去分詞或短語”,如:
(2) With different techniques used, different results can be obtained.
(3) The TV mechanic entered the factory with tools carried in both hands.
丙with+賓語+形容詞或短語”,如:
(4) With so much water vapour present in the room, some iron-made utensils have become rusty easily.
(5) Every night, Helen sleeps with all the windows open.
丁 with+賓語+介詞短語”,如:
( 6 ) With the school badge on his shirt, he looks all the more serious.
(7) With the security guard near the gate no bad character could do any thing illegal.
戊 with+賓語+副詞虛詞”,如:
( 8 ) You cannot leave the machine there with electric power on.
(9) How can you lock the door with your guests in?
上面五種“with”結構的副詞功能,相當普遍,尤其是在科技英語中。
接著談“with”結構的形容詞功能,有下列五種:
一、“with+賓語+現在分詞或短語”,如:
(10) The body with a constant force acting on it moves at constant pace.
(11) Can you see the huge box with a long handle attaching to it?
二、“with+賓語+過去分詞或短語”
(12) Throw away the container with its cover sealed.
(13) Atoms with the outer layer filled with electrons do not form compounds.
三、“with+賓語+形容詞或短語”,如:
(14) Put the documents in the filing container with all the drawers open.
四、“with+賓語+介詞短語”,如:
(15) The young lady with a red ribbon on her head is my former maths teacher.
(16) Do you know the gentleman with both hands in his pockets?
五、“with+賓語+副詞虛詞,”如:
(17) Is there any water in the kettle with this cover off?
(18) Out went the boy scouts with their uniforms on.
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With是個介詞,基本的意思是“用”,但它也可以協助構成一個極為多采多姿的句型,在句子中起兩種作用﹔副詞與形容詞。
with在下列結構中起副詞作用:
甲with+賓語+現在分詞或短語”,如:
(1) This article deals with common social ills, with particular attention being paid to vandalism.
乙with+賓語+過去分詞或短語”,如:
(2) With different techniques used, different results can be obtained.
(3) The TV mechanic entered the factory with tools carried in both hands.
丙with+賓語+形容詞或短語”,如:
(4) With so much water vapour present in the room, some iron-made utensils have become rusty easily.
(5) Every night, Helen sleeps with all the windows open.
丁 with+賓語+介詞短語”,如:
( 6 ) With the school badge on his shirt, he looks all the more serious.
(7) With the security guard near the gate no bad character could do any thing illegal.
戊 with+賓語+副詞虛詞”,如:
( 8 ) You cannot leave the machine there with electric power on.
(9) How can you lock the door with your guests in?
上面五種“with”結構的副詞功能,相當普遍,尤其是在科技英語中。
接著談“with”結構的形容詞功能,有下列五種:
一、“with+賓語+現在分詞或短語”,如:
(10) The body with a constant force acting on it moves at constant pace.
(11) Can you see the huge box with a long handle attaching to it?
二、“with+賓語+過去分詞或短語”
(12) Throw away the container with its cover sealed.
(13) Atoms with the outer layer filled with electrons do not form compounds.
三、“with+賓語+形容詞或短語”,如:
(14) Put the documents in the filing container with all the drawers open.
四、“with+賓語+介詞短語”,如:
(15) The young lady with a red ribbon on her head is my former maths teacher.
(16) Do you know the gentleman with both hands in his pockets?
五、“with+賓語+副詞虛詞,”如:
(17) Is there any water in the kettle with this cover off?
(18) Out went the boy scouts with their uniforms on.
收到。很好。
怎樣使句子簡練利落
不是所有的長句都是羅唆的,也不是凡是短的句子都是洗練的。我們要盡量運用簡練的句子﹔我們也要盡量把沒有增添語意的詞語去掉,并且將冗長句子節縮,使之簡練利落。我們可以從四方面著手:
一、消除多余的詞語
每句話里的詞藻或用語,如果對語意起不了作用就不要鋪張,要給以鏟除,因此(1)a-(7)a都嫌嘮叨,要由(1)b-(7)b來取代:
(1)a. At this point of time
→b. Now
(2)a. Bring all this to a conclusion.
→b. Concluding this.
(3)a. Has a tendency to drop
→b. Can drop easily.
(4)a. On account of the fact that...
→b. As.../Since...
(5)a. Situated in the vicinity of...
→b. near...
( 6 )a. June was determined in her mind to ...
→b. June was determined to .../
June decided to ...
(7)a. Here comes David, a person whom I idolize and for whom I have the greatest admiration.
→b. Here comes David, a person I idolize./Here comes my idol, David.
二、避免不必要的重復
重復重要的字眼是種修辭手段,但是不必要或無目的的重復,卻使句子累贅不自然,因此( 8 )a-(12)a要改為( 8 )b-(12)b:
( 8 )a. Close proximity
→b. Proximity
(9)a. Cooperate together
→b. Cooperate/work together
(10)a. Most unique
→b. unique
(11)a. The patient in Ward 2 is a mentally ill man.
→b. The patient in Ward 2 is mentally ill.
(12)a. A good teacher helps each student to become a better student, both academically and mentally.
→b. A good teacher helps each student to grow. /develop academically and mentally.
三、簡化句子結構
句子結構務必明確易解,如果出現不必要的迂回狀況,便要糾正加以簡化,而且盡量采用恰當的動詞,臻達這目的﹔因此(13)a-(14)a要改為(13)b-(14)b:
(13)a. Rarely should a doctor give a patient an estimate of how many months or years he or she will live.
→b. Rarely should a doctor estimate/predict how long a patient will live.
(14)a. The manager is responsible for monitoring and balancing the annual budget for all expenses.
→b. The manager monitors and balances the annual budget.
四、將從句節縮為短語、短語簡化為單詞
英語從句和短語,特別是修飾性質者,可以簡而略之,但語意不變,如(15)a和(16)a都可節縮為(15)b和(16)b:
(15)a. The oral approach, which is a method of language teaching, is effective for teaching oral communication.
→b. The oral approach, a method of language teaching, is effective for teaching oral communication.
(16)a. Janet's jacket, made of cotton, is too warm for hot weather here.
→b. Janet's cotton jacket, is too warm for hot weather 昨天在一本杂志上见到VIC的照片, 西装领带, 官仔骨骨.....呵呵呵 :D 最初由[长发飘飘]发布
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