俺家儿子会写诗了

云高天阔

跟宗教有關的云版都删除?
青草地. 发表于 2014-8-14 16:36

    你可以自己发，有没有人参与是别人的自由。

但不要在不知道对方是什么信仰的情况下，强行对对方宣教。要尊重别人的信仰自由，就像不信基督的人强行劝你别信一样，你也需要尊重对不。

不要在这里争论，影响别人心情，可以去意见栏提。

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椒主

找到了一个小知音 一天晚上做花园，觉得手上很痒，一看是个蚊子，甩手他也不走，于是把手挪到嘴边用力吹，好家伙，小蚊子整个身子都飘起来了，那根针还死死的叮在手背上吸呢！
福慧 发表于 2014-8-14 13:00

福慧，太善良的人容易受伤。

椒主

回复  椒主

这孩子说不定前世是莎士比亚 还留有上一世的记忆
福慧 发表于 2014-8-14 13:07

真是不敢当。

椒主

小小年纪就有一颗菩萨心肠！不过建议让他多看看你家院子里被虫和小动物糟蹋掉的东西。
designer/draft 发表于 2014-8-14 13:34

儿子说它们也要生活。

黄真真

儿子说它们也要生活。
椒主 发表于 2014-8-14 17:37

    感动。

椒主

感动。
黄真真 发表于 2014-8-14 18:24

真真也有一颗慈悲心！

椒主

Life Through A Car Window

Take the wheel..

Push the gas.

It seems unreal..

Until you pass.

Honk the horn.

Take the reins,

Avoid the thorn.

Avoid the strains.

Break the wall.

Break the limits.

Take the call.

Count the minutes

椒主

The Money Tree

The Money Tree

Is liked by all.

Gives us all money! Absolutely Free!

Without Charge Without Fee!

It's quite nice you see...

But when it comes Fall.

Nothing does it bear... Oh Gee!

At least it still stands Tall!

椒主

SCHOOL

In despair.

A window.

In repair.

A minnow.




Building up.

Breaking down.

A closeup,

A rundown.




All sold out.

Already cursed.

Full of Doubt.

Dead of thirst.




Playing with fire,

Couldn't hurt more.

Friend by hire.

Shut by the door.




Black cat path.

Luck's run out.

Do the math.

It's been dealt.




Another rumor

Time's been tight.

Got no humor.

Got no fight.




Standing strong.

Can't be wrong.

云高天阔

Life Through A Car Window

Take the wheel..

Push the gas.

It seems unreal..

Until you pass.

Honk the horn.

Take the reins,

Avoid the thorn.

Avoid the strains.

Break the wall.

Break the limits.

Take the call.

Count the minutes
椒主 发表于 2014-8-14 20:49

说实话俺看的不是很懂，但孩子的才华确实要鼓励！！:-D

椒主

说实话俺看的不是很懂，但孩子的才华确实要鼓励！！
云高天阔 发表于 2014-8-14 21:52

英文毕竟是咱们的第二语言，一些隐意我也不太明白。

椒主

        POETRY

No need to get offensive

Gather up the forensics.

No need  for hypertensive

Gather up the classics.




Every word like a symphony.

Every note, a melody.

Possibilities of infinity.

Like a cure, a remedy.




Cryptic words,

A metaphor.

Vision blurred.

A carnivore.




Every word like a symphony.

Every note, a melody.

Possibilities of infinity.

Like a cure, a remedy.

Habari

哇，第一看这个贴．刚读完了最后几首　．　:clap:
虽读不太懂全部含义，但在读詠过程中感觉了到它的韵律．　:thumbu:
保护住这个ｔａｌｅｎｔ．

Habari

一天下午写了8首，这首花了7分钟，是不是很高产呀？  儿子的画The Final ExchangeEveryday we look..To the big blue sky..But what about everything we ．．．．．!
We take all.And give nothing.When we fall.The earth will stop crying.
But for now we wait.For the day.Because it's not too late.Or else we'll pay.
The time is due.For us to change.It starts with you.It's not so strange!
So stand up!And start to change!Let's fill the cup!The Final Exchange!!!
椒主 发表于 2014-8-12 22:08

怎么感觉不像小孩子的东西，多大了　？
:thinking:

Habari

谢谢鼓励！
只有12岁，没有人生阅历，内容有点空。
椒主 发表于 2014-8-13 13:31

噢，１２了，有自己的见解了，早熟啊．
:thumbu: