俺家儿子会写诗了

椒主

一天下午写了8首，这首花了7分钟，是不是很高产呀？

儿子的画

The Final Exchange

Everyday we look..

To the big blue sky..

But what about everything we took...

That makes our planet cry...

We reap the earth for our needs.

We cut down all the trees.

Some try to sow more seeds.

But we're restricted by the fees.

As we spread out.

The earth grows weak.

As we hunt more trout.

Way past the Peak.

The more we need.

The more we take.

The more we feed.

For our own sake.

Fire and flames..

Blood and Greed..

Fun and games.

Shout the creed!

Chemicals Flood

Down this Street

Shovel the Mud

To plant your Wheat

Kick the ball.

Down the field.

Barricade the Mall.

With your shield.

Buy more Food!

To stuff it in the freezer.

Not in the Mood...

To help the old geezer

Slay The BEAST!

And farm poor bees!

Make More Yeast!

To make more cheese!

We take all.

And give nothing.

When we fall.

The earth will stop crying.

But for now we wait.

For the day.

Because it's not too late.

Or else we'll pay.

The time is due.

For us to change.

It starts with you.

It's not so strange!

So stand up!

And start to change!

Let's fill the cup!

The Final Exchange!!!

maobei

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    好棒的小朋友！:thumbu:

云高天阔

一天下午写了8首，这首花了7分钟，是不是很高产呀？  儿子的画The Final ExchangeEveryday we look..To the big blue sky..But what about everything we took...That makes our planet cry...
We reap the earth for our needs.We cut down all the trees.Some try to sow more seeds.But we're restricted by the fees.
As we spread out.The earth grows weak.As we hunt more trout.Way past the Peak.
The more we need.The more we take.The more we feed.For our own sake.
Fire and flames..Blood and Greed..Fun and games.Shout the creed!
Chemicals FloodDown this StreetShovel the MudTo plant your Wheat
Kick the ball.Down the field.Barricade the Mall.With your shield.
Buy more Food!To stuff it in the freezer.Not in the Mood...To help the old geezer
Slay The BEAST!And farm poor bees!Make More Yeast!To make more cheese!
We take all.And give nothing.When we fall.The earth will stop crying.
But for now we wait.For the day.Because it's not too late.Or else we'll pay.
The time is due.For us to change.It starts with you.It's not so strange!
So stand up!And start to change!Let's fill the cup!The Final Exchange!!!
椒主 发表于 2014-8-12 22:08

这代沟太大了，看不懂啊！！
   
是不是可以推荐给某个作曲人？ (y)

椒主

这代沟太大了，看不懂啊！！
   
是不是可以推荐给某个作曲人？
云高天阔 发表于 2014-8-12 22:18

俺也看不懂，其他的诗更看不懂。

无忧老猫

写得好。 很有才。

椒主

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    好棒的小朋友！
maobei 发表于 2014-8-12 22:17

谢谢！
已经是12岁的大盆友啦，终于懂事一些啦。

maobei

谢谢！
已经是12岁的大盆友啦，终于懂事一些啦。
椒主 发表于 2014-8-12 22:24

12岁美妙的年龄。说大不大，自以为是大哥哥了。他的诗就是他的一切。哈哈哈。好棒！

竹本小川

诗人啊

oneweek7

好棒的小文艺青年啊~~~~~~~~~~:clap:

俺都无法写得这么诗意，哎~~注定一辈子做粗人了~~:chewin:

椒主

写得好。 很有才。
无忧老猫 发表于 2014-8-12 22:24

谢谢老猫的鼓励，俺一定要转告他。

椒主

诗人啊
竹本小川 发表于 2014-8-13 00:48

谢谢小川。
领导看懂了？

福慧

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小家伙真了不起:thumbu: 小小年纪，不但才华横溢，竟有如此的忧患意思:clap:

椒主

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小家伙真了不起 小小年纪，不但才华横溢，竟有如此的忧患意思
福慧 发表于 2014-8-13 08:17

谢谢福慧，过奖了！
儿子和你一样是菩萨心肠。如果家里发现蚂蚁、蜘蛛等小虫子，俺让他清除掉，他总是一只只轻轻抓住放门外去。连苍蝇进门，他也只把它赶出门外。
俺不知道将来他怎么融入这个社会？

椒主

Birds

The birds they Fly

Past the limit..

To the sky..

Past infinite.

Through every cloud.

Weaving through the stands.

Past the cheering crowd.

To far away lands.

Free from it's cage.

Like a fantasy story.

Weaving out of every page.

Without a single worry..

Out of the Fray

Far Far Away.....

眼不见心不烦

你儿子真是一个有诗情画意的小天才！你好好培养吧。前途不可限量。