俺家儿子会写诗了

椒主

你儿子真是一个有诗情画意的小天才！你好好培养吧。前途不可限量。
眼不见心不烦 发表于 2014-8-13 08:51

谢谢！
俺是个懒妈妈，他喜欢绘画，俺送他学了4次就嫌远再没去了。
儿子是放羊长大的。

椒主

The BSoD

Oh, how had it betrayed me....
Just one little drop...
All this time with thee...
The Clicking of death..
Flooded through me...
Like Death-Watch Beatles crawling in and out..
The sound was deafening..
Unable to be frozen.. The damage was dealt....
Once
Twice..
No freeze shall mend.
No thousands to be poured shall fix.
Finally, a spark ignites on the screen...
But everything was flawed...
The only thing that could be seen....
Twas all too familiar.... The BSoD....

云高天阔

俺也看不懂，其他的诗更看不懂。
椒主 发表于 2014-8-12 22:22

孩子会思考了，多鼓励。你要努力了，很快（估计现在）你就无法跟他用英文沟通了，鸭梨大吧？:-D

椒主

This street

I will choose not. Quantity over Quality.
And to reply with comments all so witty.
Like most, I wanted someone to pity.
As I walked down my city.

I look across the road
Where the goods are sold.
There lay people I was told..
Who got no dime to hold.

They try to fit with this mold.
This mold that they were sold.
I look at it as a code.
As people sleep in cold.

A can rolls down this street.
Just as I take my seat.
I think it quite a feat.
For someone to sleep in all this sleet.

I look where the gum has been glued.
I start to eat my food.
Something to lift my mood.
Feeling fresh and renewed.

As I quietly sat.
With the wind in a combat.
As I start to put on my hat.
I noticed someone.. Someone to look at.

He had no hat to wear.
And no food to fill his share.
Filled with scratches and wear.
Thinking the world unfair.

Why oh why.
Must we see?
All this injustice on a land called "Free".

椒主

孩子会思考了，多鼓励。你要努力了，很快（估计现在）你就无法跟他用英文沟通了，鸭梨大吧？
云高天阔 发表于 2014-8-13 09:43

谢谢庭长提醒！孩子快到叛逆期，开始跟俺作对了。俺说啥他都要纠正、补充。唉，鸭梨真大！
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网管

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    没有完全看懂。
不过，一个12岁的孩子对世界的思考实在难得，鼓励！

椒主

回复  椒主


    没有完全看懂。
不过，一个12岁的孩子对世界的思考实在难得，鼓励！
网管 发表于 2014-8-13 10:28

谢谢鼓励！
只有12岁，没有人生阅历，内容有点空。

椒主

LIFE

What's at stake?
What's to make?
At cross roads...
Bearing loads.
Sounds explode.
Crosses burn.
Helps us learn.
False roses.
Under our noses.
While we play.
While we pray.
What we say..
What's okay.
Night and day.
The cliché
Influencing.
Too depending.
How to fake?
How to break?

青草地.

回复 1# 椒主
這孩子能寫會畫，還很有思想，
應該試試SSAT(http://www.ssat.org/test/about-the-ssat)，如果可能就去上更好的學校.

椒主

回复 )，如果可能就去上更好的學校.
青草地. 发表于 2014-8-13 13:45

谢谢！谢谢！
他喜欢写写、画画。还写了一些剧本，做了一些小电影。改天俺整理后传上来。

青草地.

谢谢！谢谢！
他喜欢写写、画画。还写了一些剧本，做了一些小电影。改天俺整理后传上来。
椒主 发表于 2014-8-13 13:52

好好培養。看看這兒的文章或許會有幫助：
http://coviews.com/viewforum.php?f=31

竹本小川

谢谢小川。
领导看懂了？
椒主 发表于 2014-8-13 08:16

朦朦胧胧

黎丽

一天下午写了8首，这首花了7分钟，是不是很高产呀？  儿子的画The Final ExchangeEveryday we look..To the big blue sky..But what about everything we took...That makes our planet cry...
We reap the earth for our needs.We cut down all the trees.Some try to sow more seeds.But we're restricted by the fees.
As we spread out.The earth grows weak.As we hunt more trout.Way past the Peak.
The more we need.The more we take.The more we feed.For our own sake.
Fire and flames..Blood and Greed..Fun and games.Shout the creed!
Chemicals FloodDown this StreetShovel the MudTo plant your Wheat
Kick the ball.Down the field.Barricade the Mall.With your shield.
Buy more Food!To stuff it in the freezer.Not in the Mood...To help the old geezer
Slay The BEAST!And farm poor bees!Make More Yeast!To make more cheese!
We take all.And give nothing.When we fall.The earth will stop crying.
But for now we wait.For the day.Because it's not too late.Or else we'll pay.
The time is due.For us to change.It starts with you.It's not so strange!
So stand up!And start to change!Let's fill the cup!The Final Exchange!!!
椒主 发表于 2014-8-12 22:08

你儿子真是了不起，小小的年纪有如此的胸怀。画画的很好，诗写的也很美！好好培养吧，为你骄傲。

椒主

好好培養。看看這兒的文章或許會有幫助：
青草地. 发表于 2014-8-13 13:55

青草地，谢谢你推荐的网站，有很多有用的信息。
儿子来加拿大的时间不太长，累计4年多。他在四年级第二次抵加后，俺担心他跟不上，在四年级快结束时，俺去学校问他的老师他是否需要暑期补课，没想到老师说他接受很快，准备推荐他去考Gifted Program。在五年级时他以99%考起Gifted Program。
儿子是那种智商很高，情商偏低的孩子。俺不指望也不敢期望他将来能出人头地，只是希望他将来要走的路比俺的平坦一些。

椒主

朦朦胧胧
竹本小川 发表于 2014-8-13 14:30

朦胧诗。