|
最初由[红 树 林]发布
thank you ,i hope i can speak good english,please correct them for me.
若要硬套一堆成語在文章中,自然不會太通順了,只是有創意,文法上有小小地方要改正。
我現在試把你的文章稍作修改,盡量保存原意吧!
Let me tell you my story.
A few years ago I acted wilfully come to Canada.
I thought there would be a heaven waiting for me, and who knows it was only a bubbles dream of spring。
In fact, I know nothing about Canada,
I have nothing to show for. I am penniless all year round
I need to work hard to earn money, and concentrate to study English whole heartedly, but my English is still in a complete mess.
I tried again and again, and still resulting a crushing defeat that made me very frustrated.
At this critical moment, you came and saved me.
I will never give up learning because I understand success cannot be made overnight.
If you are thinking one job is for forever,this is a joke.
I'll closely linked to English studying, and I'll also hope that effort can set the world on fire,so that I can have a new look in front of you.
At last I hope we won't disperse in a hubbub.
就以這句為例
thank you ,i hope i can speak good english, please correct them for me.
可改成
I hope I can speak better english, please correct me if I was wrong, Thank You! |
|