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This is a old Ling. It's imcomparable with the one who is young.
好 运 发表于 2012-11-7 16:41
an old Ling, a little better.
when she was young, looks more correct.
but still a Chinese English even after correction. The way you said may not be understandable for English speaker. That's culture difference.
I'd say Her photos really show her age, but her photos took at her younger age could be more attractive.
May not appropriate for me to do this, but just a little advice for kind purpose.
please correct me if there is any error in my sentences. |
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