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                                                                      犯罪类 作文 8分范文

10月24日考试大作文：

Detailed description of crimes on newspaper and TV can have bad consequences on society, so this kind of information should be restricted on media. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Recently, there has been a concern over news media reporting crimes with too many details. For many reasons people believe such coverage should be reduced. Personally, I agree with this opinion.

First of all, such reports help people understand more about crimes, such as the motives, process, and possibly ways to protect themselves in a dangerous situation. Also, it can help ordinary people gain more insights about the consequences of wrongdoings, therefore crime rate may be reduced as well. Thus, knowing more about these details has some positive meanings. Furthermore, stories with abundant crime details are very likely to attract the public attention to the problematic situation, which serves as a catalyst for governments to take proper actions to cope with such a problem.

On the flip side, there could be some dangerous consequences. Firstly, some details of criminal offenses such as rape and murder are not appropriate for being exposed on the screen. Where violent scenes are shown, discomfort among the public, especially children, will be caused. Besides, this will traumatize victims further as it reminds them of their unfortunate experience. They deserve to be protected and cared by the rest society and their trauma should be healed rather than aggravated.

What is even worse is that potential criminals could watch such stories and emulate the evil deeds. This is mainly because detailed description could serve as a textbook for those would-be offenders. Besides, the techniques and measures police officers use to crack down a criminal are disclosed, which might help them avoid being caught.

To conclude, I believe detailed reports about crimes on the news media should be limited because they bring out more adverse effects than benefits. Otherwise, victims could be hurt again and emulation of crime deeds would increase.

实用词汇：

reports=coverage=stories       新闻报道

there has been a concern over....       关于...大家很担心。

be curbed=be reduced=be controlled=be limited     得到控制,减少

motives    动机(复数)
gain more insights    获得更多⻅解
consequences     后果(复数)

wrongdoings     错误的行文(复数)
On the flip side=however=on the other hand    然而,反面是

... criminal offenses 罪行(crimes 替换词)

appropriate     合适;恰当的;
be exposed    被曝光,被报道
the violent scenes   暴力场面

traumatize   使精神首创伤
trauma   创伤
aggravate   加重

potential criminals =would-be offenders   潜在犯罪者
crack down   打击(犯罪者)
be disclosed   被揭露,被泄露

adverse effects    负面效应

otherwise   否则的话