回复 中国音乐
I write in English because My computer setting for Chinese has problem. I am also confident on my English. Although Level 4 and 6 are very stupid English tests. I passed them with high score many years ago. Sad for all of you, who may master very well in English grammar, but can't communicate with people in English. Please pick up a piece of "Toronto Star" and read an article. you will find how stupid the grammar you learned in China.
zhen2005 发表于 2011-6-14 11:04 http://bbs.51.ca/images/common/back.gif
if you can't properly judge your enlish level, and keep showing your shit, it is your stupidity. 
)My English is not good. However let me try to correct some grammar errors, in order to help you realize what' wrong in the writing below:
"I had (HAVE) read this article for 3 times since I really wantED to learn something about highschool here in case my kids need help in the future. My conclusioN is NO POINT. I really don't get what this article wantS to express. What is the point?
By the way, my three cousins had("had" CAN BE REMOVED) graduated from unionville highschool ( they all be(HAVE BEEN) here since grade 8). One of my close friend's (FRIENDS')son just enrollED in bayview highschool last september and one of my friend's daughterS (or FRIENDS' DAUGHTER) have (HAS) been in seneca hill high school for more than 2 years (SINCE MORE THAN TWO YERAS AGO). Never hear (I HAVE NEVER HEARD)about something (ANYTHING) complication (SO COMPLICATED) when I discussED with them about their school life. My personal feeling is THAT the school life here is OK (ALRIGHT) excepte (EXCEPT) in some unsafe community (COMMUNITIES). Hope parents won't be panic by misleading OF THIS ARTICLE.
LEARNING IS LIFE LONG PROCEDURES, ISN'T IT? ESPECIALLY IN A NEW ENVIRONMENT.
Thinkaboutit 发表于 2011-6-14 12:08 http://bbs.51.ca/images/common/back.gif
写中文英文都没问题. 可是连起码的英语语法都不懂就不要乱写了.
"I am confident" should be followed by the preposition "in" or "with".
For example, "I am confident in (with) my English".
A singular pronoun should be followed by "has" if you want to use the verb "have";
"high school" are two separate words, just like you do not use "myfather"
The last sentence is more ridiculous - it does not even have an object where it should have (a noun or a pronoun). It should be like "...by this misleading article".
It is not a bad thing to write in Chinese oglish. It is the level of English proficiency of the writer that is laughable.
中国音乐 发表于 2011-6-14 14:45 http://bbs.51.ca/images/common/back.gif
请不要用英文写你的评论，太多的语法错误让人无法卒读。what is the point writing in english here? for what？
salzhang 发表于 2011-6-14 10:23 http://bbs.51.ca/images/common/back.gif
不像一个小孩子写的，够成熟
啃得鸡 发表于 2011-6-14 09:36 http://bbs.51.ca/images/common/back.gif
英语错误太多。 4级绝对不及格。
中国音乐 发表于 2011-6-14 10:33 http://bbs.51.ca/images/common/back.gif
回复 中国音乐
I write in English because My computer setting for Chinese has problem. I am also confident on my English. Although Level 4 and 6 are very stupid English tests. I passed them with high score many years ago. Sad for all of you, who may master very well in English grammar, but can't communicate with people in English. Please pick up a piece of "Toronto Star" and read an article. you will find how stupid the grammar you learned in China.
zhen2005 发表于 2011-6-14 11:04 http://bbs.51.ca/images/common/back.gif
I had read this article for 3 times since I really want to learn something about highschool here in case my kids need help in the future. My conclusio is NO POINT. I really don't get what this article want to express. What is the point?
By the way, my three cousins had graduated from unionville highschool ( they all be here since grade 8). One of my close friend's son just enroll in bayview highschool last september and one of my friend's daughter have been in seneca hill high school for more than 2 years. Never hear about something complication when I discuss with them about their school life. My personal feeling is the school life here is OK excepte in some unsafe community. Hope parents won't be panic by misleading.
zhen2005 发表于 2011-6-14 09:01 http://bbs.51.ca/images/common/back.gif
我们在这里不要争论其他不相关的事情了，因为孩子们会来看这些评论的，他们看着这些会很失望的，因为这真是太出乎他的意料了。请不要在孩子们面前争吵。
为可爱的孩子为我们写的这篇文章赞叹，真是个善解人意的好孩子，谢谢你。你知道父母们是多么想了解你们的处境和内心感受啊。在国内你们的学习环境是父母所熟悉的，那种班级化管理和班主任的照顾都使父母比较安心。到这后一切都很陌生，包括你们的学习环境和交友环境，所以你的介绍真是很重要，如果再仔细点我们的收获就更大了。
在初初移民过来时，在为生活忙碌的挣扎里，很多时候我们真的忽略了孩子们的感受。孩子们也与我们一样经历着文化和语言的挑战，而他们的压力应该更大一些，因为他们毕竟还没有长大成人，承受能力有限，但在磕磕绊绊的移民路上，他们大多走得更勇敢更坚强，有时他们几乎是我们的榜样。
爱心幼儿园 发表于 2011-6-14 13:39 http://bbs.51.ca/images/common/back.gif
To Zhen2005: 儿子，也是一个12年级的高中生对您以上言论只有一个字的评价“clueless".
blueberrybaby 发表于 2011-6-14 21:04 http://bbs.51.ca/images/common/back.gif
再说几句，几位对文章提出异议甚至说“垃圾”的有点过分。一个三年级就来加拿大，现在还能用流利的中文描述自己高中生活的孩子是值得成年人赞扬鼓励的。如果你家里有中学生，和你的孩子交流一下；如果家里没有中学生，就当学习了。不要用中国式的成年人的思维去评价这篇文章。
blueberrybaby 发表于 2011-6-14 20:18 http://bbs.51.ca/images/common/back.gif
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