RCIIS-雅思 发表于 2013-10-10 14:51:12

有好野梗喺要一起分享喇

跟大家分享一篇好文,适用于大部分要参加雅思考试的筒子们。虽说不好全部照抄,不过“偷下师都好啊嘛”http://forum.yorkbbs.ca/editor/images/smilies/-monkey/5(4).gif

A person should never make an important decision alone, important decisions should be well thought out. People, who know you well, know what is best for you, and close to you can give you good advice, give you a different perspective, or share their own experience.

When I had difficulty deciding which classes to take in collage, I talked to my teachers and advisors; they had the knowledge and expertise to help me determine which classes were the best ones to take for my future career.Without their advice, I might have chosen unsuitable courses.

In collage, I had convinced myself that I was not good enough to act in the school play.Therefore, I decided not to audition even though drama had always been my passion. The day of the audition, a friend of mine asked me why I was not auditioning. When I told her I did not feel I was good enough, she was shocked.She was able to provide me with another perspective on myself and my talents. I rethought my decision and tried out….and got a lead in the play.

Last year when I was trying to decide whether or not I should study overseas, I talked to my friend. This was the best thing I could have done. This was a big decision for me because I had never been overseas on my own and I was not sure if I could do it. She had studied overseas the precious year. She told me abou tthe challenges and opportunities I might encounter and helped me make the right decision. I went and it was amazing.

Whenever I am faced with an important decision, I seek advice from others so that I am well-informed and have the benefit of their perspective and experience.


PS:根据小编的一点点经验,写作尽量用一些简短有力的句子,不要全部都用长句,因为雅思改卷老师要改那么多卷子,心情本来就不爽了,再用一些转来转去的长句了,估计他们要直接忽略了吧http://forum.yorkbbs.ca/editor/images/smilies/-monkey/45(3).gif
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